Name: Kenlie
What worked: There is a very subtle introduction of each sound and it all blended very well, also the repetition of sounds was soothing.
What could be improved: Not entirely sure of the narrative or story being told.
Name: sophia
What worked: The laugh sounds very natural, and overall a very good piece.
What could be improved: A more distinct theme, it seemed a bit choppy in the transitions.
Name: Lily
What worked: This piece was one of my favorites and I especially like the abrupt ending, and the everyday effect portrayed from the piece.
What could be improved: I think it could have benefited from a beginning that represented the beginning as well, the beginning lacked the theme of the ending.
Name: Simon
What worked: I appreciated the artist's use of quiet space and sounds because I think that's just as important as a louder piece.
What could be improved: Maybe a wider range of sounds it all kinda have a similar sound.
Name: Hannah
What worked: I liked the overall sound, it constantly felt like it was moving which was nice.
What could be improved: I would improve on the ending just a little bit more of a fade out.
Name: Ari
What worked: I really liked the rewind effect, added a nice touch to the manipulation of thoughts.
What could be improved: With the rewind effect making it a more smooth transition.
Name: Baxter
What worked: Very clear story and narrative.
What could be improved: At the end it got a bit distatracint, maybe redo the ending.
Name: Colin
What worked: I really liked all the different sounds and it was very different than everyone else's.
What could be improved: I’m not quite sure if it followed the guidelines of the project with some of the sound clips.
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